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Publishing News!
Now is the time of waiting. My third novel, “To Break the Bundles,” has been submitted to a plethora of literary agents. Nothing much else can happen with this novel project. It is in the nefarious hands of the gatekeepers of the publishing world. It is a time to wait, to gather rejections as they come in. It can be horrible, the waiting, or it can be the time to set out on a new project.
For me, doing is better than waiting. I allowed myself a post-project mope, my standard emotional letdown after completing a project. I invented a few choice fantasies of what I would do if I were king of the publishing world (which it’s good that I’m not) and then I decided to get to work. On to the next project!
There are several sketches in the Idea-Box, all of them vying for attention: Two novels, a three-act play, and a promised children’s book. I can hear their clamoring. But the most pressing need is a bit of writing coupled with a bit of marketing. One of the truisms of the Indie-Author world is that a savvy Indie recognizes the need for a ‘Perma-Free’ title. This is the introduction of the Author to the Reader, a way of saying “Hi there, here I am. How about a free book to let you know what I am all about?” Or, to put it in the vernacular of the streets: “The first taste is always free.”
The new project will be a prequel to “The Best Dark Rain.” That novel began in situ, taking up the story after the world died. Some of the Dark-Army of Beta-Readers, along with some of the lovely reviewers, have expressed the desire to know more about the characters from “The Best Dark Rain.” How did they survive when everyone else died? What happened? This prequel, “Clouds Before Rain,” will be an attempt to fulfill those desires.
The structure is built, the Scrivener file formatted, so it’s time to lay electronic ink to virtual paper. Sixty-thousand words, two months, no problem. You can remind me later that I said that. Fell free to smirk when you do so. Eight weeks, just about the time limit for the pack of literary agents to do their worst. In the meantime, whilst I wait for them to pronounce their doom, I can be productive. Look for “Clouds Before Rain” to be available in January of the coming year.
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Into the Perils of Publishing
With a sigh of relief, I can say that my latest novel is complete, with a new working title of “To Break the Bundle.” The Dark Army, my faithful and wonderful Beta-Readers, have had their say. The last month was a flurry of re-writing, proofing, editing, and then proofing again. Now this new novel must face the perils of the light of day, sent out into the brutal world of Literary Agents and, hopefully, Publishers.
The last week has been a dedicated grind of assembling submission packages, and sending them forth into the merciless inboxes of busy Literary Agents. A few of the early rejections have already arrived, their sting somewhat dulled by the shield of my Author’s Thick Skin. In submissions, the bad news comes first. Good news, if it comes, comes later on.
I hope to have some good news to report in the very near future. The first good news would be a request for more material, the nibble of an interested Agent. Then, with any luck, comes a request for a full manuscript. It is a slow process, to be sure. In the meantime, I try to hide under my thick skin. I have other projects clamoring for attention: two novel projects and a three-act play. Better to be writing while waiting.
But what is this new novel, you ask? “To Break the Bundle” is a Romantic Thriller that begins in Vienna, Austria. Complete at 126,000 words, it is a tale of strange meetings, secrets from the past, and a deadly danger. Here is the pitch for the novel:
Vienna, Austria, a city of palaces, music, and cafés. But behind the cold, grey stone lies a dark secret. Against this backdrop of culture and shadows, the fates of three unforgettable people will be drawn into a common peril.
Perry Farmon is a disillusioned professor on sabbatical in Vienna, searching for his lost creative spark. A strange friendship and a mysterious love alter Perry’s quiet world, drawing him into a shared secret. The powers threatened by that secret force Perry into a deadly flight from danger. He must learn trickery and cunning to survive. His life and love hang in the balance.
Zita de Luca is a woman marked by a wine-colored stain on her temple, the shame of her family, and anger. An opportunity for revenging her family name is complicated by an unexpected passion for an American professor. She must choose between the two.
Käru “Charlie” Villiger is a habitué of cafés, either an outrageous liar or a dangerous man. He holds the key to the past, but time is running out. Charlie must pass on what he holds before he is silenced by those he has betrayed. He must choose someone else to carry the burden.
The secrets of the past threaten the lives of those that hold them, and threaten those that are desperate to remain in the shadows. To protect their secrets, shadowy forces will pursue Perry and Zita across two continents, threatening their love, and their very lives. The chase becomes a conflict of revenge and desire, of shadow and light, of love and the struggle to survive.
Stay tuned for further developments. Meanwhile, my first two novels are alive and well, awaiting your pleasure. “The Best Dark Rain,” and “Blood Rust Chains,” are available on Amazon. Just click on the menu above for more information.
Thanks for stopping by, and thanks for being readers!
Marco
Book Review: Frank Herbert’s “Dune”
Dune by Frank Herbert
My rating: 5 of 5 stars
What can one say about Frank Herbert’s “Dune,” a pillar in the pantheon of Science Fiction? I have read this book several times in my life, beginning as a young man. Last week, I found myself thinking of some passage from the book, and so another reading began.
To read “Dune” is read several books, books within books. One of the reoccurring themes in the novel is the concept of feints within feints, motives underlying motives. I suppose it should come as not surprise, then, that there are many levels to this novel. On the surface, there is a tale of wild adventure, set in a complex feudal system flung far into the future. The inventions of our era have, in the distant past of this tale, wrought havoc, bringing about a new structure. Computers, ‘Thinking Machines,’ have been replaced by special beings trained in these functions. ‘Atomics’ are heirlooms of the great feudal families, not to be used on pain of planetary obliteration. The warfare of this era has become personal, a warfare of edged weapons and poison-wielding assassins.
This story of adventure is the first tale, the presenting story. Young Paul Atreides, heir to a Ducal fief, is cast into a whirling storm of intrigue, feudal struggle, and blood vendetta. This tale is enough to satisfy the reader, a story full of adventure, danger, and struggle. There are heroes and villains, the valiant and the cowardly, the good and the despicable. It is a rollicking saga.
The basic plot-line of the novel carries with it many deeper stories, stories that will reward the thoughtful reader. There are far greater forces at work in Paul Atreides life, forces that are outside of his control, forces put into play long before his birth. Frank Herbert explores the ideas of destiny, predetermination, and the struggles of a young man coming to terms with his destiny. Will he accept the mantel that has been crafted for him, crafted without his consent? Will he fling the mantel away, forging his own destiny? As the story progresses, the layers of destiny and treachery become ever deeper, entwining themselves into the myth of a hostile planet.
An arid and frightening world, the planet Arrakis becomes yet another layer to the novel, an ecological treatise on the nature of human beings and their environment. Using the interplay between characters and the harsh landscape they inhabit, the author weaves a story of the land altering the people, and the people altering the land. Is the environment a product of human action, or is the environment shaping the human action? Could it be both?
Beyond all of this lies the mystery of the nature of myth and religion, human engineering of myth, and the impact of that engineering on the future. The building wave of religion and myth carry the story to a crescendo, standing on the knife-edge of cataclysmic warfare.
Rereading Frank Herbert’s “Dune” was a pleasure. The novel contains everything a reader could want: sweeping adventure, love, parental bonds, loyalty, treachery, suspense, betrayal and revenge. The hero’s journey is clearly mapped, convincing, and captivating. For the thoughtful reader, there is much more, a deeper examination of the nature of society, destiny, and religion. Never far from the thread of the tale is how human beings interact with the ecosystems they inhabit, changing them and being changed by them.
I highly recommend this novel. At the very least, the reader will be rewarded with an adventurous romp. Beneath the adventure lies a deeper examination of what forges destiny and purpose, religion and myth. I believe that many readers will be drawn back to this book, rereading it and treasuring it, as I have done.
A Short Slavic Circle
A Quick Trip with an Old Friend
Professor Gus, Ljubljana
Me and a Bee, Ljubljana
There are churches, of course.
Two knuckleheads reflected in translation. It’s always about the translation.
The Ruins of Disco — Abandoned Diskotek, Zagreb
Lake Balaton — Trapped in the weird villa, run by Attila
Poseurs — Flak Tower, Vienna
I will leave you with this, just because. Lots of possibilities here.
The Author Dude |
Austria.When he isn’t creating great fiction or being a good Hausmann, he explores the world with his lovely wife. If the sun is shining too brightly, or the birds are too chipper, Marco studies German grammar to create a suitably dark mood for creativity. He is the author of two novels, The Best Dark Rain and Blood Rust Chains. Marco’s current projects include a children’s book and the first draft of his third novel, a political satire/thriller set in Europe.
Book Review: “The Sun Also Rises” by Ernest Hemingway
The Sun Also Rises by Ernest Hemingway
My rating: 4 of 5 stars
Ernest Hemingway’s “The Sun Also Rises,” published in 1926, has been continuously in print for over nine decades. That, in itself, is a strong testament to any novel. I cannot say exactly how many times I have read this work, but I am going to guess at five readings. My lovely wife brought the book home from the library and, as it was just sitting there, I picked it up and read it. Why?
It has become fashionable, in the years following his death by suicide, to malign Hemingway’s work. There are many reasons for this, most of which do not have much to do with his writing. A cult of personality has grown up around Hemingway’s life, a cult of machismo, that of the hunter, the fighter, the fisherman, the man of many wives. Having read a good bit about his life, I believe that this cult of personality played a part in his undoing. He was a complicated public figure, a famous American novelist, a man of braggadocio and bluster. Infantilized by his mother, he overcompensating for that upbringing by embracing a facade of manliness that he would become famous for. But that is the writer, not the writing. Let us set that aside.
Hemingway subscribed to the “Iceberg Theory” of composing a novel. Using spare, simple prose, he told the tip of the tale, leaving the reader to plumb the depths of what lay beneath his stark words. It may not seem like a huge revelation now, but compare Hemingway’s work to some of his contemporaries: Theodore Dreiser, Ford Madox Ford, John Dos Passos, all great writers who wrote deeply complex novels. “The Sun Also Rises,” seems almost a novella by comparison. Yet below the deceptively simple descriptions, and direct dialogue, lies the bulk of the story. Hemingway’s writing style has had a significant impact on modern novels. Because of that impact, as well as his impressive body of work, he remains an important literary figure.
The novel was written in late 1925 and early 1926, following Hemingway’s third trip to Pamplona, Spain. If the reader knows about the ‘Running of the Bulls’ in Pamplona, the chances are it is because of Hemingway. The characters in the novel are based on real persons, those that made up the party of that third journey. The novel consists of three books: Paris, traveling in Spain and the Festival of San Fermin, and a short third book that is the aftermath and conclusion.
On the surface, this is a novel of flawed characters, desperate friendships, and misplaced longing for love. Only look a bit deeper, and there is so much more. Jake Barnes, the narrator, has been wounded in World War One. The reader is never told the exact nature of his wounds, but he has been rendered impotent. Barnes’ wound becomes an exploration of masculinity, and an example of the Iceberg Theory. Much later in the novel, there are some very subtle (and masterful) hints at what may have happened to Barnes. It is there, sketched as a simple line drawing, yet an integral part of the story.
The beautiful and feckless Lady Ashley, Brett, represents not only the love interest of several characters, but the emerging modern image of female sexuality in the 20th Century. She does not come off well in the process, but none of the characters do. And so it goes, from Robert Cohen to Mike Campbell, both besotted with Brett, both towed along in the building madness of the fiesta.
The novel spills through the streets and cafés of Paris, giving the reader a view of a bygone era. The journey continues into the Basque country of Spain, a quiet fishing trip in a land untouched by the civil war looming in the next decade. Then all of the ill-fated characters come together for the fiesta, a group of disparate expatriates standing out against a backdrop of traditional Spanish culture. The backdrop is portrayed as pure and good, the characters certainly not. As the Fiesta ends, the world comes crashing in, leading to the aftermath.
“The Sun Also Rises” is a deceptively simple novel. The characters haunt cafés and bars, talk, argue, drink an extraordinary amount of alcohol, and then move on. Read through quickly, it is an enjoyable story, a succinct slice of a time and a culture. Taken slowly, however, and a much larger set of themes emerge, just visible beneath the surface. It is well worth the reader’s time to take the novel slowly. Sexuality, masculinity, honor, love and loss, values and friendship, these are the themes that are waiting to be discovered.
I would add a note of caution. The novel is a product of the time in which it was written. There are derogatory terms used to describe one of the characters, who is Jewish. There are also racial terms used to refer to one of the minor characters. Some readers may find them offensive. In no way do I endorse any racial labels, or defend Hemingway’s use of them. I simple point out that they exist in the novel.
In conclusion, if you have read Hemingway, but not “The Sun Also Rises,” I highly recommend the novel. If you have managed to live your life without reading Hemingway, then this is a good place to start. If you like what you read, I would suggest “For Whom the Bell Tolls” as Hemingway’s other excellent early novel, along with some of his short stories, particularly the Nick Drake stories. As always, Happy Reading!